Sam Low

Bike Riding With Sylvia Plath

She would have remembered today’s blue sky / from summers at the Vineyard Sailing Camp / where she learned about tacking and heeling / and coming about on the calm or choppy / waters of the Lagoon.

She would have remembered today’s blue sky
from summers at the Vineyard Sailing Camp
where she learned about tacking and heeling
and coming about on the calm or choppy
waters of the Lagoon, all the techniques
necessary to survive vagaries
of wind and waves, the weather of the world.

Separated by some twenty years,
we never met, yet shared a Cold War country,
a moral and philosophical outrage
against the McCarthy era, the bomb,
the subtle strictures on what girls could learn,
all the while loving the romantic lure
of berets and cafés and New Wave films.

Loving, too, the wind in our hair, the flight
of our bikes along the East Chop bluffs,
the sun above and Vineyard Sound below,
like sea birds whose wings were our strong legs,
fearless for that one moment of flying
under the sky a blue she would have known
and where we both were, maybe, most at home.

 

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Submitted by Anonymous (not verified) on Wed, 06/30/2021 - 17:49

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Tina Unti Madera Ca

As usual Holly …. Spot on! Clear images, evocative, full of the breath of life you always strive to impart. Thanks for sharing with the world.

Submitted by Anonymous (not verified) on Mon, 07/05/2021 - 14:17

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William Sterling Wayland

July 5 , 2021

To whom it may concern…

I love the opening, “she learned…all the techniques necessary to survive vagaries of wind and waves, the weather of the world.”
It presumes the readers all know what vagaries Sylvia suffered later. The understatement strikes a quick punch to the midsection.
I love the way the poet makes imaginary friends with Sylvia sharing their mutual childhood memories, “loving, too, the wind in our hair…”
The reader can never quite forget that we know what came later. What tender empathy this brings.

Sincerely,

William Sterling

Submitted by Anonymous (not verified) on Wed, 08/18/2021 - 20:20

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Leigh Williams Poughkeepsie, NY

"wind in our hair" lifts my hair right up!
Thank you for the beautiful poem!

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