I am calling you, America, I am your citizen. I am trying to find you. Does your amber still wave And your sea still shine?
I am calling you, America,
I am your citizen.
I am trying to find you.
Does your amber still wave
And your sea still shine?
Have you lost your dream, America?
I see a country of personalities with no character.
I look for a statesman but am lost in a sea of salesmen.
The politicians campaign but don’t govern.
The poets have lost their vision.
The preachers deceive their flock.
It was your dream so many dreamt that
Burned bright like a beacon in the night.
It was your dream that delivered hope
Where hope had no hope.
I am your citizen, America.
I embody you in my creation.
Carried you from womb to womb,
Nurtured you from generation to generation.
You’ve inspire me,
And I’ve depended on you.
But it’s not the same anymore, America.
The cycle of change has become cyclonic.
Your people are awash in anger.
Your united states divide while
Dark clouds looms over the Republic.
Are we a country of Cains and Abels?
How can I be my brother’s keeper
When I no longer know him?
You have a black man in a white house.
Your people vote red or blue,
And so many are brown and yellow.
Are the ties that bind
Color blind or color bound?
Your economy is squeezing me.
I’ve tightened my Corn Belt,
Bankrupt my Rust Belt,
Fracted my Frost Belt,
Revived my Bible Belt.
And I always buckle my safety belt.
Your people are divided, America.
They quibble and quarrel.
If no one will cross the aisle,
Is there anyone left
To answer the call?
Are we fighting the Civil War again?
Would Grant and Lee still sheath their swords
To save the Republic?
All these hawkers and barkers that
Pretend to be your friend while they peddle
God and apple pie and your way of life.
Charlatans, the entire lot of them.
I am your citizen, America.
I search for your relevance because
I believe that you still matter.
Don’t let me lose hope, America,
For the nation you still can be,
For the greatness you can still achieve.
I am your citizen, America.
I am trying to find you,
But I am running out of places to look.

Comments
Is that Walter Cronkite's
Curiosity JonesIs that Walter Cronkite's house?
No, it is Phillip Tiedtke's!
Mikki MaitlandNo, it is Phillip Tiedtke's!
So moving. So true. I'm
Bob Cape CodSo moving. So true. I'm searching too......
I think/hope we all are.
Mikki MaitlandI think/hope we all are.
Beautiful piece, written in a
David Hughes EdgartownBeautiful piece, written in a very nice way, to which people of any political perspective can relate, so as not to demonize or shame, as is otherwise so in vogue these days.
Thank you for putting my
Lynnea North Palm BeachThank you for putting my feelings into such a beautiful verse
Thank you for this very
Gee Gee Barden Porter Ranch, CA, and Oak BluffsThank you for this very beautiful, timely, insightful, and thought-provoking piece, definitely worth sharing (I have).
This IS America. Beautiful.
Andy Heyward Los Angeles/EdgartownThis IS America. Beautiful.
Thank you for this.
John Marton Courtenay, CanadaThank you for this. Reassuring to find a thoughtful, non-angered, clear eye on the situation.
John:
Oliver V. New York CityJohn:
This is one of the most patrioric works I've read about our country.
You've managed to capture the essense of what this country is and how we've lost some of our ways.
Thank you.
John, What a clear sighted
Jane Brody Buchanan, MIJohn, What a clear sighted and nuanced way of seeing our present dilemma and putting it in verse. Thank you for your poem.
Curiosity Jones: The house is
Richard Canty ChappyCuriosity Jones: The house is the former, and remodeled, Vose House; it is two houses north of
the Boch house on Edgartown Harbor.
Well done! And, I imagine,
Rob Burnside Kingston, PAWell done! And, I imagine, precisely what America's Poet Walt Whitman would tell us now, when we dearly need him.
Beautiful description of our
Sherrie Orlando, FLBeautiful description of our wonderful Country. My hope is that we can recognize it again and soon.
Thank you.
The picture is perfect too.
Sherrie
It couldn't be a more
Humberto Javier Gomez La Habana, CubaIt couldn't be a more accurate vision from the hand and heart of a man that i have as a teacher in life, and most of all, as a friend...
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